09 June 2008 @ 02:30 pm
Fic (drabble) - DBSK - Sellotape  
Mmmmm, finished class for the term. Having a few days to recuperate before going flat-out for exams. (Kind of have failed one paper this semester, but since I was almost quitting earlier this year, I think two out of three aint bad.) ANYWAY! Mimei is stuck at Uni doing her last(?) big essay of semester and in an attempt to get her to have a break earlier I promised her a drabble. So here it is! (Also, it snowed here on Saturday night. Wheee! My first snow in like, 3 years. Yus!)

Title: Sellotape
Author: Page Russet ([livejournal.com profile] page_r)
Fandom: DBSK/TVXQ
Pairing: Yoochun/Junsu (sort-of)
Rating: PGR (PG-13) (I know! I know! shut up!)
Words: 356
Challenge: sticky-tape (also known as, 'first thing you notice in your room, challenge!') and present tense! (since everyone is doing it now-days, thought I'd have a go.)
A/N: I don't know if they have the 'Sellotape' brand in Korea, but lets all assume for the course of this drabble that they do, kk? ty.



Yoochun yanks harder on the tape.

Sellotape. He loves the feel of it. The sucking, tearing sound it makes when he pulls it. The shudder of inconsistent movement which thuds through his hands like a broken bassline.

He tears another strip off with his teeth, the disgusting rubber-slick taste in his mouth a welcome distraction. Turning, he smoothes it onto Junsu’s skin in careful parallel with the others. A pretty row of gleaming plastic along a pale forearm. One two three four five six seven. Seven. Lucky number.

They’re waiting. Stuck between rounds of recording. Jae and Yunho are in the booth working on their harmonies. Yoochun, Junsu and Changmin are sitting around waiting for their next turn. Recording is like waves on a beach; rush, slow, rush, slow, push, suck, push, suck. It would be soothing if it wasn’t so damn boring. So hard to keep the energy pumping after round after round of sitting staring at the ceiling.

Yoochun considers the line. Eight? Junsu is ignoring him in favour of listening intently to the sound of their bandmates filtering through the speakers. Yoochun runs a finger down one cool surface, feeling the heat of Junsu’s skin trapped beneath. He runs a finger over the soft skin exposed in between the tape, then down the ladder of the whole row.

No eight. He digs a fingernail in and tugs.

Tape makes a different sound pulled from skin. Shush tear. Junsu makes a tiny sound and looks over at Yoochun, pupils wide, then down at his arm. A faint line of red to match the other six.

A small frown on his face, Junsu lifts his arm and licks slowly up the strip of heated red. He eyes Yoochun briefly, then places his arm on Yoochun’s lap, turning back to watch the others through the glass.

Yoochun stares down at the offering. The light glints off plastic and traces of saliva.

He looks at the roll of tape in his hand, then at his fingers resting, surprised, at the edge of the line.

Junsu’s head is tipped slightly, in awareness, towards him now.

Eight? Or five?

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Please do be letting me know what you think, kk?
 
 
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[identity profile] mimei.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 03:18 am (UTC)
omfg *dies of yoosu goodness*

will cmnt better later.
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 03:32 am (UTC)
yey

k, go eat and rest.
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[identity profile] mimei.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 06:33 am (UTC)
gaaaah *wibbles* i love this hardcore! you absolutely must crosspost to [livejournal.com profile] yoosu_yongwonhi so that everyone can share in its glory. sellotape is suddenly so sexy!!! *glomps* tysm! i will memory & treasure this to/from time immemorial! ♥
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 06:46 am (UTC)
Oh good. I don't know that it's worth treasuring till time immemorial, but I'm glad you like? I didn't think, when I started, that I'd be able to get a whole story out of sellotape, but obviously I've paid more attention to sellotape in my life than I realised.

I don't know if I really touched on it properly, but I wanted Junsu to come off as slightly masochistic in this, was that visible? I'm almost tempted to write another part... :/

I think I will crosspost, now that you mention it, because when I post the JYUFoD I think that will deserve some waving in the face of fandom, so I should check these sorts of places out...
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[identity profile] mimei.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 07:01 am (UTC)
it goes in my golden box and never leaves! the one critique i'd raise is 'thuds through his hands'...i love the way this extends with bass, but i'm not sure thuds/hands really produces the best effect.

it was! of course, that amplified my adoration :) i absolutely love how it works and ties together, and the recording-waves simile.

yoosu_ywh is like, one of my favourite places ever :D there's also [livejournal.com profile] hug______, but personally i only post multiple pairing or non-yoosu there because it's a bit of an unmanned mess.
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 07:09 am (UTC)
Yeeah, that was one of the parts I wasn't too grand with either. I was trying to express that feeling when the tape kind of starts-and-stops as you're pulling it which results in this kind of hard judder. But I didn't think that judder was a real word, and I'd already used shudder so. :D

good good! ^___^ *is happie*

So things are slightly less crazy there? Good to know. XD

Are you back home or still at the uniful?
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[identity profile] mimei.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 07:20 am (UTC)
ooo, crosspostage, woot! ♥ judder is an odd word.

home and hopelessly procrastinating, which is my cue to return to hiatus land, methinks. so that i can do MORE RESEARCH AND MORE RESEARCH AND NEVER, EVER GET THIS THING TYPED OUT...
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 07:28 am (UTC)
yeah, like judder-bars. Also known as... cattle stops? I don't actually know what the official name for those things are.

Just make sure to take decent breaks! You SO have the time to do it now, just make sure you don't send yourself more insane in the mean time. AND STOP RESEARCHING, FOO! Put it all awaaaay. *snuggles*
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[identity profile] yue-yue.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 12:43 am (UTC)
OMG a willow tara icon!!!! haven't seen them in a long time!
my first OTP<3333
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 12:48 am (UTC)
hahaha, I love the willow/tara, too! (Did you know there's a rumour that Joss is going to bring Tara back in the comics?) I've been going through a massive Buffy fanfic spree lately, and I saw one similar to this by [livejournal.com profile] livia100x100 and went on a mission to find one for myself! *hugs her willow and tara*
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[identity profile] yue-yue.livejournal.com on June 10th, 2008 08:36 am (UTC)
ah, these rumors were there even during the 7th season..I've been out of the fandom since buffy ended and didn't really follow the comics..but a comic tara is not the real tara T__T can't forgive joss for killing her and creating kennedy ><;;;;;
but well..the man is a genius, can't stay mad at him^^
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[identity profile] akaxiah.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)
one! one!
XD

what a wonderful fic. very nice read. love your style ♥

glad you cross-posted. thanks for this!
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 08:06 am (UTC)
Hooray!

This was very ummm, abstract, (or at least, that's what I was going for) for me. Most of my normal stuff isn't quite like this, but I wanted to capture that state of mind when you're bored and tired where reality starts to slip a little...

So glad you like! :)
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[identity profile] akaxiah.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 08:28 am (UTC)
you certainly did. it was very well-written. i felt the boredom, and the snapshot kind of quality you get when you're dead-bored and merely trying to pass the time. (especially when you're used to a speedy kind of life and being shipped of to a different place each day)

congratulations!♥

EDIT/P.S.:
su is such a massochist XD random, sorry.
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 08:33 am (UTC)
yaaaay. I know I do things like stick sellotape to other people when I'm intensely bored, so hopefully Junsu doesn't mind. XD

^_^

Hah! He so is! (Well, in my mind, in this fic he is!) ooooo, now I want to write a Junsu p.o.v.... @_@ *ponders*
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[identity profile] akaxiah.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 02:44 pm (UTC)
no, junsu really is. he has admitted it. the other 4 (well, at least jae and chun) have labelled him as being M, hehe).

go write a junsu pov! :D

if you were as hot as chun, i doubt anyone would mind you sticking sellotape on them ♥
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[identity profile] dongbangnie.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 08:26 am (UTC)
silly yoochun ^^

"He looks at the roll of tape in his hand, then at his fingers resting, surprised, at the edge of the line."

>_< my stupid brain cant process d above line. can u plz kind to explain?
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[identity profile] prairie-grass.livejournal.com on June 9th, 2008 08:30 am (UTC)
:)

Yoochun is holding a roll of sticky-tape in one hand, and his other hand has his fingers resting along the edge of the line of pieces of tape he had stuck to Junsu's arm. I knew that line would potentially be confusing, so don't worry about not getting it. ^_^
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[identity profile] dongbangnie.livejournal.com on June 17th, 2008 09:17 am (UTC)
thank you ^^
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[identity profile] r-hr-maniac.livejournal.com on June 15th, 2008 02:58 pm (UTC)
LOL this is just a GREAT idea. too awesome ♥
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