Love it....is there more.
Say...theres lots more?
...I'll give you pop-tarts...how about toaster-strudels? Very yummy?

You did a great job on this story.

Do you have more great fics to share?
Love to read them.

The ideas in this fic were fresh and captivating.
Kept me going without a single sluggish downfall.
I couldnt read fast enough to see where you were taking this.
Fabulous work.