Just wanted to let you know how much I really like this so far. There is a lot of originality, and that's hard to do in the HP fanfic world. (I read the entire thing yesterday so comments refer to all chapters thru 6.) I like how you pulled the reader in the Vision w/Harry using the random thought process. One other writer did that too me once (with Draco having a flashback to the war) and it's not easy to do. I also like the way you write Harry's confusion and blushing every time he looks at Draco after the Vision.

Voldemort's appearing in the school like that was a surprise; how he gets Harry to go with him, knowing what would happen to him if he did go, had me holding my breath. I also like the way you write your Draco - not really evil but still manipulative and sexy.

Great job - I'm sure your updates are going to be worth waiting for (I've waited a year for an update on some of my favorites, so I will be patient.)

Thanks for taking the time to share your story with us.