Like it, but I would think that Voldemort would have infected one of his deatheaters with the lycanthrope, instead of Draco, so he could start building a pard that will answer to him. May I give a suggestion, if you already not tought about it, maybe you should post at http://www.pommedesang.com/efiction/ also, then you could reach a larger audience, beacuse it was only luck that made me arrive here, and your fiction deserves far more than to be overlooked beacuse we don't now it exists.
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Carolina